All Comments on 'Birthday'

say what??

Huh? feels like a lot missing in the story, too rushed, slow down and fill your stories out.

this story was a good effort, but is rife with misspelled words & some used out of typical context. (Lad)???? A lad is a young man, not a woman. Also, skirts are plural, and women rarely wear more than one at a time. Aside from that, not a bad story.