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by Hamptonscat

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sexymeupsexymeupover 7 years ago
no details

don't think you even tried to put any effort into the story...one star, even that was too much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bored

You sounded bored. Sorry!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Positive comment

interesting plot

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 7 years ago
Welllll...it IS to the point! :+))

It's more like samples, with a summary?

If you want to develop your writing craft...I recommend the writings of

Kethandra and C C Rider.

Their use of specific details in the unfolding stories is exquisite.

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