All Comments on 'Birthday Boy'

I thought this was going to be hotter!! Still a hot read. Thanks for sharing

Bit of a short story overall but a good one. Would like to see this continue and where you end up taking it.

15 years as straight as an arrow, then Mom swings 360, no, it has to be 3600. Unrealistic

I wasn’t expecting the mother to “flip the switch” and offer the blow-job immediately, even with too much wine to drink.

No drama or tension, no build-up. Could've summed the whole story up in one little paragraph. Barely two stars.

Keep on writing

What an innocent birthday party with a lovely twist. Karen certainly blew her son's candle out. Voted the full 5 marks.

Read a few of Mr Cane's stories on Literotica including Mrs Willoughby and the gorgeous Walnut Tree.

Had a lovely surprise when I stumbled on Cafe Latte with two middle aged women talking quietly about some of their darker secrets. It was so exciting for older women to read and imagine. It deserves some extra treatment and some more secrets.

An older lady

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.Reminds me of my mother and myself except we teased for three years before we made love.

thought it was good would like more please

Sorry but I missed the part where mum thought it a good idea to blow her son, then want sex. Why did she offer? What did the gf do that was wrong to need to leave? Reasons have to be explained in stories, otherwise we scratch our heads and wonder why we read it.

Must have a part 2, she left her door open.

That said to me, a second part is on the way.

Well done, good story.. THANK YOU..

MEH! I ONLY want my dick and cum in a pussy.