by CharmingVixen
Epic lovers. Can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em. But the interludes between them are so sweet.
Thank you for bringing us another chapter in the saga of Jade and Akim. It's a lovely, sensual fantasy.
Great chapter, but the time inbetween updates is appaling. It really reduces the enjoyment of reading the story :(
Couldn't believe it when I saw you had posted another chapter. I thought the last one could have almost been an open end and had only hoped you would continue. As usual your writing is impeccable and so wonderfully descriptive. I love the plot and please, please post another chapter as soon as you are able. Thank you so much for continuing.
I agree with mayness , thought ch8was the last. so glad you continued with it and i love the direction of the story. cant wait to read next part!
love this story and was so happy to see an update! that being said, I'm STILL dying in suspence! please dont wait another year for the next chapter =(
Your stories are well written AND hot. I wish you submitted more frequently.
The sex was beautiful, but tinged by bitterness at him turning the plane around. I can't wait for her to escape, and for his reaction to it. Hot.
Please more! I love your stories! Wish there was more than what's already offered. I keep coming back to your webpage, hoping a new entry had been put in. So please with no more adieu!
...but its really just pissing me off. What is wrong with her? She clings to him one second and then does everything to get away from him the next. Why doesn't she try to talk to him? He clearly loves her, something that is new for him and he therefore has a difficult time showing. But she has done so little to show her supposed love. I keep hoping the story will turn around, that Jade will do something worthy of someone's love and maybe I'll be pleasantly surprised with the story's conclusion. Their physical relationship is hot, without a doubt, but emotionally I'm having a hard time even liking them.
i just love this story! ive been following it since the beginning and really hope for an update as soon as possible!
Hope its not another year? Please don't! I love this story and really want a good, happy ending.
I am going to add to the chorus of pleads asking that you add the next chapter to this story and please don't wait another year before you decide to do it ....
So I am joining the chorus to beg you to please submit the next chapter ASAP.
And as others have said, I would trade places with Jade in a heartbeat, but I think it's time for her to give a little as well, given the extraordinary lengths he has gone to prove his need of her. But do make sure he gets rid of the harem!!!
At first I couldn't believe that you had submitted another chapter. I was so excited! Please continue. Continue for your dear readers.
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Finish this oh so gratifying story, please us to an endless delight.
This has been a beautiful story, and to some extent I am glad you have not made it a quick ending, but as we all agree, the suspense will soon be killing me! Please have mercy on your devoted fans and submit the next chapter!
I know you have a real life but can't wait for the end of this story and I disagree with comments Jade should give in this is not who she is and how can she trust a man that doesn't keep his word
This story is far too captivating to be left like this!! Please write more!!! :)
I've been following your stories for years and I love them, this one especially! I know real life often gets in the way, but f you could find time to wrap this one up, your readers would be thrilled! It seems like this one is so close to finishing, and I just love Julie characters! Personally, I feel like she had to escape, but I hope in the end she and him reconcile on her terms! Great writing and I am going to continue to check for updates! Hopefully well get a conclusion to this awesome story!
It has a great plot; it's keeps the readers wanting more and it's not too contrived. I hope you continue the story soon, I'm curious as to what's going to happen with Jade and Akim.
if you can finish this story it would be fantastic. Its a good thing i discovered your stories friday night, stayed up til 5am reading your stories. Amazing stories, thank you for sharing it with us.
You should finish this story. It's way too good to leave it unfinished. Give us some closure.
This story is fantastic, please tell me you're going to finish it. The suspense is killing me.
i love this story and waiting for an update! u r so good at this ! love ur writing! they are hot !
Please please please please continue this story! It keeps me up at night, wondering what they are going to do next!
Sexy, smart author Lady, please finish this story, name your terms. I'll do it. No Joke. I just need to know what happens!!!!!
Unfinished stories drive me mad! Especially ones that are written so well.
I have a sneaky suspicion this will never be finished! This makes me not want to read any more for fear of other unfulfilled endings.
Please finish this story . It is so amazing so please please please continue it.
This story is amazing, won't you please continue it and bring it to a satisfying finish where the prince fixes his errors and they live happily ever after? Pretty please?
More of this story please. I love this. I like that the heroine doesn't immediately fall in love with her kidnapper/abuser/master. She resists her captivity even though she has loving feelings for him.
I know this submission was done a while ago but PLEASE continue this story this is by far my favorite story on this entire website
Please continue the story, the best story that I have read by far.
I knew it as I was reading it that this would be yet another unfinished story on this site. But I kept reading and hoping this one would be different. Oh well. At least the story didn't end with them saying goodbye and walking away from each other.
Why go to all the trouble to write 9 chapters and then to stop? Or was this supposed to be an open ended story?
... to flow from the ending of Chapter 8 to a "and they lived happily ever after" ending instead of leaving us hanging 😕