All Comments on 'Birthday Girl'

Really good story, thoroughly enjoyed it! Good structure, well written and as horny as hell. Can't wait for chapter two!

Well set up, good pace, believable chain of events. And the sex was hot. Part 2 can't come soon enough!

A rare example of quality writing! Thank you. A hot story. Loved the kink and the description - the heels, the nails, the hair. The buildup got me so hard. Check out the author isawyourmommy who has written some stuff that is somewhat in this vein. Keep it up! :P

These girls you describe are so fucking hot....

can't wait for part 2!

That was amazing!!! I can't wait for more!!

I loved the naughtiness of it. The description of the sex was well-written, realistic, and extremely hot. And I'm so glad that Krista got at least Part 1 of her birthday gift; with a boyfriend like that, she definitely deserves it. Thanks for writing... I'm off to chapter two.

Very erotic and hot story, always been a fantasy of mine to find a chick like her! Can't wait for Chapter 2!!!!

I would have told her to pack her shit, because she's moving in with me! Let her bf slut around since he doesnt want all the fringe benefits that come with that package! Ive never understood someone who would rather drink than fuck! Lol. ...and kinky girls are hard to find! ;)

Great story!!!

Great story it's hard to keep my attention for a paragraph and read every word! Someday Lord willing I'll find my dream girl like her.

I found my hottie! Just hope she's a little vixen like Birthday girl!! She says she'll do anything I ask her to, so we'll see!!!!

I usually get bored with literotica, but you sure got me hooked on the Birthday girl. Got a few moments where I felt a spark course through me like when he was teasing her before putting his tongue in the star.

and some sly dog just stole one ;)

You write about sex like it should be written about!! Your tale had everything, loved it!