All Comments on 'Birthday Girl Ch. 3'

What an absolutely wonderful story full of detail and well thought out. I look forward to reading a sequel to the "Trilogy" possibly a 'menage a trois' involving Mike, Lisa & Louise? It would be interesting also, to hear how Dafydd got on with Louise.

Keep up the good work.

Gareth

what a wonderful blend of storyline, imagery, and eroticism (or it is sensuality?)! Simply masterful! Encore!

I was moved so many times reading this, the romance, the beautifully described sex scenes. You are truly a gifted writer.

Absolutely lovely and literate in so many ways! Touching and poignant, erotic, sensual, and smolderingly hot. Keep up the outstanding work.

Plese consider doing a chapter 4, Maybe Mike, Lisa and Louise!

Birthday Girl is worthy of additional chapters, it's such a great story!

I would like to give 6 stars!

I really liked the setting, the imagery, and the knowledge of western life, apparently some decades ago. The simple life where nature and feelings reign supreme and life is not subtle is something that we seem to have lost in our hectic, electronic world. Honesty and feelings are evident throughout as well as a good story line with the heat of erotic coupling increasing with each situation. A nice birthday gift of a much wanted "first time." Thanks. (P.S. - there's room for much more to this story.)

Good narration but I thought the story would have continued - it just ended on the note that it was the birthday of Lisa to be appropriate for the title of the story.

I realize that this dates to 2001, but I only have three things to say: "More, More, MORE!" The writing continues to be superb, with just a little teasing to see what's happening next. Character development is solid and the color (of faces and other things) is apparent. There's so much waiting to be developed (but I'm not capable) that I lick my lips for a continuation!