All Comments on 'Birthday Party'

vey well written!

Silly story, too similar to the other one where son fucks mother. Just to trite.

the beginning was all right,but then you moved

your story too fast,it felt like you didn't have enough

time to write your story properly,and it got worse

with the rushed meeting between the mother and

son next day.very disappointing.2 stars.

A totally emotionless story. It felt like sitting down to a meal of cardboard.

The plot line has been written so many times, and this example was probably the most generic of them.

I know that Brenda ii going to want Ron's cock inside her pussy all night long now, The fun has just begun for each of them!!! Please continue.

Using a trite, cliche title that was already used 40 times, just on this site, hardly comes under the category of "started well".

Fucking the male stripper in front of my family and friends is a fantasy of mine. 5*s!

This and the other one, why are they just blurting out their relation.

Would love to read about the encore. Also, have the redhead "punished" for hiring him.

You knew it was coming but it did not take away from the story at all and the ending was perfect.

Nice quickie mom & son! May we have an encore for round two? BTW, where's Daddy?

Encore!

maybe with the red head? but it was a sweet story

Great plot! Would have been intense to see the follow-up with the two of them the next night though!

Good story, great ending.

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Hawt und Zsexxsi!

11/10!!!!!

Good premise, but the description of the sex acts is severely lacking.

Good story, though the sudden ending without the follow-up was disappointing.