All Comments on 'Birthday Present'

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miniacminiacabout 14 years ago
Friend

Hey Zach, wanna be my friend??

phil2213phil2213over 11 years ago
Now that's a birthday gift

Very hot very nice!!! I never myself had a similar birthday gift because I'd never forget that one ever never ever. You know Brody was one helleuva friend for Zach to have pushed Marlene to this point or perhaps it was Marlene's idea. Well that part Emma didn't elucidate. Even with certain full disclosure in absence, we have experienced a fun and erotic blind date kindof hot sex experience. Marlene was by no means out of her element in her total seduction of Brody which gives the reader a mystery box to analyze. Was Marlene a secret admirer or was she a hot girl with a fantasy or was she a woman who loved sex at any opportunity. Emma left "hat mystery for the reader to ponder as an excursion from an otherwise hot story about a very lucky birthday boy. Thanks Emma for another masterpiece.

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