All Comments on 'Birthday Present Initiation'

Awesome, wish my sisters and mother had been as interesting as this.

I would like to see this story continue! Thanks!!!

i liked the story. very erotic. another chapter would be great!

God, you're hot. Don't stop now. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.

5 stars, fave story, fave author. Thanks for a superb effort.

max052

you threw in the mother and sister title...and oh no men in the family, convenient

it wasn't very pleasing because there was nothing hidden or taboo, from the start it was "i like girls" and a lick, kiss, finger fest

where is the excitement, the wonder and plot? i don't consider, "oh all females on their 25th get this" when they've been carpet munchers from the get go

Could you add more of a twist? Domme style or the men of the family being turned into sissys or cuckolds and having to subs to the females, anything other then lets just jump right into pussyorgasmfest

not a satisfying read

I'm very impressed by your work with this story. I love how you don't skimp on the details and you bring the reader into the story. This is the first of your stories that I've read, but I'm encouraged to read more if they're anything like this. A great sexy erotic tale.

Incredible story! I hope you’ll right more. You’re sequel ideas sound amazing

Great story. So fucking hot!!! I wish I was girl so I could enjoy that. I guess I'll make do with what I do have.

Please write the sequel.

I agree with everything everyone else has said, so fucking hot.

Maybe you could do another where the mother is tricked into having sex by the daughter with a mask on, also maybe have it so the mother or daughter is forced into there first lesbian encounter and then later tricked into an orgy involving there mother or daughter including a taste test with girlcum

I never give perfect scores sorry! I'd still be interested in that sequel, though...

Loved it. Nice build up to top climax. More please.