All Comments on 'Birthday Strip Tease'

I lost interest fast and i love seduction

Loved it. Really well written.

Brilliant and Hot!!! Great writing.

Terrific job with the tease. Smoking hot and sexy.

That was truly intense. I was kinda wishin that was me ;)

This is a sexy teasing dominance and prey/predator story. I love it! Had me wanting that strip tease for me.

There was nice tension among the characters and the sex was hot. good work!

Fucking hot Laylonnie!

I can say this through, I would not have lasted as long as she did, and if she walked out I would have just waved bye to her

...this was probably THE BEST lesbian thing I've read. It seems like all the other "lesbian" shit on this site was made for men. But this? This is how it really goes down. No scissoring, no weird double-dildo type shit. This is the REAL DEAL. Damn, I hope my birthday is like this.