All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

If you have to rely on making comparisons to famous characters in media, then you have already lost audience members. I don't watch criminal minds. I need an actual description.

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It is great to read a story that does not inspire comments regarding politics or religion. Well done.

Five stars.

Kind of short, but still a wonderful read.

thanks for sharing.

5-stars.

Ambivalent on this one. It was an "accident" but she was drunk.