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by Willingtoshare

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Enjoyable.

After also reading your earlier stories I think your grammar has improved, so good for you with persevering. This is a great little story and your style makes it for easy reading and to get lost in the moment.

Personally, I would like to see the next part of We finally meet as there's so many directions it could go. (also made me very squirmy)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great first part to a story that has lots of potential. Hope you get around to writing more.

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Just another horny straight guy trying to get his kicks in life. Bit of an exhibitionist, bit of a flirt and a bit of well... only time will tell. Read a lot of stories on here so thought I'd give it a shot myself and see where it goes. http://forum.literotica.com/showthre...