by IowaGuy95
Kinda short don't you think?
Wam Bam no thank you man! Waste of a read.
Maybe I read it to fast!!
She is having first sex ever, with 3 guys willingly! So unrealistic! And first sex with 3 guys entering simultaneously is very rare even in porn.
Build a plot man, make first sex more descriptive. It very special for her. You ruined it.