All Comments on 'Birthday Wish'

by IowaGuy95

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HibbityhooHibbityhooalmost 9 years ago

Kinda short don't you think?

kinkymindnbodykinkymindnbodyalmost 9 years ago
No build up,plot!

Wam Bam no thank you man! Waste of a read.

chytownchytownalmost 9 years ago
Where Is The Story***

Maybe I read it to fast!!

kantabcdkantabcdalmost 9 years ago
Too short!

She is having first sex ever, with 3 guys willingly! So unrealistic! And first sex with 3 guys entering simultaneously is very rare even in porn.

Build a plot man, make first sex more descriptive. It very special for her. You ruined it.

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