All Comments on 'Bisexual Man Surprises His Ex'

Loved the story but you should find a proof reader. Punctuation is the difference between "I helped my Uncle, Jack, off a horse" and "I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse".

Not a bad story, but lots of grammar mistakes.

That was great. Very exciting. Such a freedom of expression. I really enjoyed it. Loved the flow. You write so well. I can't imagine being able to add much in the form of criticism. Looking forward to you other works.