All Comments on 'Bishop Takes the Queen Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I really like Carlin! This is a great story, fun characters, glad to get another chapter!

geemeedeegeemeedeealmost 3 years ago
Such a great story!

Aw man, everyone deserves to be loved like Carlin is on his way to loving D’metrius. And Metri’s feelings about therapy are not unusual for black men, but I hope he goes.

I look forward to seeing them out together! Will their first date be New Year's Eve?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

please write another chapter enjoyed these characters a lot the story was well written had me hooked loved it but def need another chapter

dnsontndnsontnalmost 3 years ago

Well, I'm a bit wrecked by this. Conflicted. Saddened by the pain, lifted by the pleasure. Like the other comments here: I hope there's more. Here or in Ben's story, I hope there's more. If this is all then I need to say "thank you" and move on. Masterful story telling, Penny Dreadful. Masterful!

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