All Comments on 'Bitch Resting Face'

He woke up. 😁

Fun story

Shoulda cum all over the unicorn too.

4-stars

Funny how she went from bitch to hot in a naked second! I would have liked something bad to happen to Mandy and Greg. A better job proof reading would help.

A couple glaring errors:

I never figured out who wasn't invited to the wedding. In the end i figured it didn't matter.

Also, even bitchy models are unable to "taunt" with their asses. But you gotta love

her "taut" ass (that one occurs twice).

Otherwise, I'm good with the story, category, characters and sex. 5*

Mandy cheating. Revenge fuck. Yup. LW.

2nd read through — he did cum all over the unicorn; my mistake.

Why not send photos of Mandy and Greg fucking to EVERYONE? Incest. A terrific way to embarrass both Greg and Mandy. That’s a BTB right there.

This is the most under-rated author here. All his stories should be rated 4 or higher. This one should be at least 4.5. A fantastic writer who isn't afraid to break the formulas.

Really enjoyed this! As someone said, Greg and Mandy needed to be burned a bit and definitely outed to friends and family. 5*s.

massage therapist?

actually, that was pretty good. 4 stars.

Quirky, but it was fun

4/5

Nice story. More BTB than Romance...

Isn't it Resting Bitch Face?

All my other thoughts are included in comments below.

Keep 'em comin'.

Great story- very erotic- enjoy this author

Well done & very enjoyable.

5 🌟 s.

Bill S.

Decent story,but spoilt by an abrupt ending.As he was living with Mandy,what happened immediately after his night with Claudia?.

I liked this, a really soft sexy read, nicely executed

Just how hot & sexy can you get in one short story? You proved here about as hot as possible. Very well done. 5 stars.

Bill S.

Noice....!!

5 stars

This story is erotic, but it was shit. Could have been great if the writer would have had an editor. There's also no emotion to the story except for when the guy was talking about great revenge sex but not the start of something. Other than that, it sounds like a sociopath that can't speak or write in English very well. The sex scene was too over the top with such lack of emotion. Try again, writer.