All Comments on 'Bitsy's Inhuman Submission Ch. 17'

i hated seeing Bitsy like that, but I loved seeing the story progress. Patiently :) waiting for the next chapter.

I am in love with this story!!! I cant wait for the next instalments!

Please, I need to know what happens!!! I've read each installment beginning to end, and I'm devastated at where this is left. Please write more!

Love this story... I read all 17 chapters in one day couldn't stop reading it... Hope you finish soon anxious to know what happens between Bitsy and Stuart... Hope it is a happy ending and that you kill that Tracy woman... Sorry don't like her, but love the story!! Great work!!!

Please finish the story. I have to know what happens to Bitsy, Stuart, Nadia & Tracy.

I am trying to finish up the latest can of writing worms I opened (A Dom's Best Friend) before again tackling BIS. I will be perfectly honest: I feel as if I have written myself into a corner that I don't know how to get out of.

As to who lives and who dies, I do know those answers (as I've written the middle and the end), but both the middle and the end are a LONG way off.

What an absolute fucking nerve! I can begin to explain how much I despise this character. His poor fragile ego suffers because she’s had enough after being gang raped.

He goes from sharing her a couple of times with his brother to whoring her out to everyone under the not so tender guidance of the woman everyone hates.

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