All Comments on 'Bittersweet Memories'

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LilacQueen15LilacQueen15about 4 years ago

He loved her. It wasn't time for her to join him.

hebert100hebert100almost 11 years ago
sad but lovely

thank you well written. captured the sorrow and loss of one who has lost a love one in the service of our country. Marines, they watch over their own.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not As Bitter As You Think

Great story! A great reminder to love the time we have and the people we really care about in our lives. We have such a short time and often forget to tell them often how much we care about them until they are gone! Then it is to late!

Jeff818Jeff818over 19 years ago
Touching

Very nice story..... well written.

sacksackover 19 years ago
very well written!

Good description, plot, and delineation of characters. Interesting twist toward the end. Your writing is very clear and lacks the "forced" cleverness of other writers. Bravo!

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