All Comments on 'Black & White & Red All Over'

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MaternalyObsessedMaternalyObsessedalmost 10 years ago
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To have a good life together they need

acceptance and stability. A lasting three

way love affair is damn hard to make

work as it is.

Bringing in more characters wouldn't end well.

redlion75redlion75almost 10 years ago

wasnt this somewhere else

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Read the Author's Note

RL, read the dang author note at the beginning, he explicitly says this is a redone version of another story previously posted and even gives the title.

"This is a requested alternate version of AS SIMPLE AS BLACK AND WHITE? with significant changes to relationships"

HypoxiaHypoxiaalmost 10 years agoAuthor
thanks, anon

And thanks to redlion75 too. I followed your suggestion on AS SIMPLE AS BLACK AND WHITE to write this version. Reaction has been great! I have sequels planned for both storylines, and yes, they'll go in different directions. Stay tuned!

HypoxiaHypoxiaalmost 10 years agoAuthor
@MaternalyObsessed, I'm concerned too.

I don't know how their relationship will play out. Since we now have two BLACK AND WHITE storylines running, maybe one will have a happy ending, and one not. I'll set the characters loose and see what happens. I let characters write their own scripts. I just transcribe and edit. It's easier for me that way. ;)

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