All Comments on 'Black and White Prologue'

well was a bit confused reading rest of the story....

now found the prologue!

a bit messy here... but this made the story very very interesting.... and weird!

This little snippet would have a lot more impact if you built up to it. You should write a whole prequel series about how Black and White met, how they fell in love, and you should of course describe every detail of their sex lives.

And you should end it with the story of how the King of Light, Hazelhoem, wiped White's memories of his time with Black.

This is only my suggestion, feel no obligation to do as I asked. But I would really love to read such a story if and when you have the time to write it. Thanks for posting!

Evil evil lass, cruel thing for her to do.