All Comments on 'Black Box 2.0'

This has lots of potential and for the most part it's good, but I suspect you are going to have a fine balance to tread to keep it from spiralling out of control.

Interesting concept so far. Really looking forward to the next part!

I'm super interested to learn more about all the parties that are involved!

Very original. So far, so good. Looking forward to the ending. 5/5

Wonderfully entertaining.

Good creative concept with impressive detail.

Looking forward to seeing your next installment.

Interesting concept. Very intrigued. Thank you for sharing.

Very creative and well written. Keep doing what you're doing.

Can't wait for round 3!

Very well written. The character development is excellent ! I can't wait to see if Kevin can still be a decent person after he is made super human. Can he resist the temptation for revenge ? Stay tuned !

Just found this series and read the first 2 chapters. What a well done sci fi story. It reminds me a little of the do over story G Younger story Getting it wrong. Only 2 complaints - 1 - its only going to be 5 chapters? Rats! 2 - The title did not get my attention until you published chapter 3... perhaps adding a few teenage girls losing clothing would have gotten my attention faster :) Seriously no need for more sex - what a great story and now I get to read the next chapter!

I,m liking this more and more

Wow, awesome story so far.

I'm a new Fan.

Thank you for sharing this with all of us here.

Big 5 stars from me.

There’s a thread of physiological realism in this that’s missing from a lot of transformation stories, that said the MC would need to be pretty stupid and naive to not get that he had a jealous overwatcher earlier in his life, who was also probably responsible for his writing career going down in flames. I’m enjoying it, but this chapter was a very very slow burn, fingers crossed it picks up its pace shortly. 4⭐️

Great story line. Thanks.

I'm really enjoying it. The premises are novel at least for me and I like the twists. It's also well edited which I appreciate.

This chapter is way over the top. Too much bizarre developments to my liking, it becomes comical.

Didn't see that coming, but that's what made it so great. Can't wait to read your next chapter!

A 5 to the first part but no comment, so one is due here for sure. I read Slingshot earlier tonight and said it can't be a one off so you are going to be added to my list of authors I'm following. I was right. This is shaping up easily as good. 5 for this chapter too.