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"I said bring'em here!!" he snapped.
Tra'mon was referring to the flimsy zebra-print bikinis I had dropped, and when I realized this I nearly fainted. He was telling me to bring them to him while he was still fucking Julie.
"O Gaawd." I thought to myself.
Nevertheless, the fear and intimidation I felt was like no other. I found myself walking towards him as he continued pounding away on my wife's pussy. Julie, in turn, had her eyes closed and was grimacing in both pain and pleasure at the same time.
Timidly, I approached. In defeat, I just handed the bikini speedoes suit to the black stud. My hands never trembled so much before.
With uncanny arrogance, Tra'mon simply pulled out his monstrous cock and grabbed his bikini from my limp grip. That is when he wiped his cock with them. I stood there in disbelief as he then put them back over my head and face. Once again, he snapped them into place over my face. This time, it was more than just the disgusting scent of his large cock and balls in them. Now, they were wet and also contained both his and Julie's cum juices. Non chalantly, he put his ominous black cock back inside Julie's pussy.
"Leave us." he demanded.
Submissively, I turned and began walking out the door with the sound of Julie groaning and moaning, once again. She didn't even look up to me. She simply accepted Tra'mon's ruthless and brutal fucking of her as if it was expected.
As I stood out in the hallway looking back, the black man pounded Julie in the most fierce way one can imagine. The intensity of his fucking of her had just increased to a level I thought would never be possible.
"Oww.. Arghhh.. Oh, Oh, Oh God!" Julie squealed.
"Close the door and git' the fuck out." Tra'mon ordered.
"I'll bring dis' cunt back when I'm done usin' it." he added, now with a firmer and more commanding tone.
"And grab that other bag too, boy." he ordered, referring to the small mesh bag of his laundry sitting against the wall near the door.
Unbelievably defeated, I just did what I was told.
With the cum-smeared soiled bikini speedoes suit over my face, I picked up the remaining two bags and his bag of worn bikini underwear from the floor. I carried them back to my apartment.
The disgusting sounds of Julie being fucked in severe pain combined with her intense groans of pleasure echoed in my ears. They echoed through the entire building. I couldn't have felt more degraded. The sounds could be have been heard from outside the building as well. They were that loud this time.
Finally back in my apartment, I just slumped into a chair. I sat there feeling confused and defeated as my arms "drooped" to the floor. Demoralized, I just sat there confused and wondering what all this meant. I questioned if Julie would be coming back at all now, and my mind wandered in and out of wanting her back. My emotional state was one that I had never felt.
end.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoI agree with the others comments , there's no real need to make the young man quite THAT arrogant , he's such the superior male obviously it didnt require it. I think the husband should have accepted just how pathetic a specimen he was and enjoyed his new role as a cuckold husband. Several years ago it happened to myself, without all that violence and the transition was fantastic, some guys , both black and white CAN'T satisfy their wives sexually so cuckolding CAN be a great lifestyle for some couples.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI am having a very hard time trying to figure out this story. It is really quite sad. Aside from the pathetic, racist, over the top stereotypes, there are no characters any sane human can identify with. Your Black super-hero is a vicious animal, not a man and why anyone would want to be around him for more that 30 seconds is beyond me. I can understand why a woman would want to have extra-marital sex, but to be dominated by a sociopath and monster is just beyond the pale. This story is NOT erotic. It is a very disturbing portrait of someone's warped racial fantasy. I think nearly all Black people would find the characters obscene racial stereotypes. I know lots of Black folks and none of them come even close to your depictions.
spyintheskyover 12 years agoTotally agree with the two comments below, trying to find stories on here that go beyond the hi, wanna fuck, take that hubby, the end is not easy. At least even with the stereotypes and over emphasis on the repetitive and mundane this story makes an attempt to get into the psyche of the characters and though greatly exaggerated examines some of the issues involved when a beta male faces an alpha male determined to devalue everything about him in front of his wife.
Fact is stereotypes like that wives, black men and white men exist. Many wives do have a fetish for such characters, many accept an abusive relationship from men and the excuse from Julie about 'its just his culture' whether you consider that racist is irrelevant its an attitude I have heard from women be it black, medditeraean, arab or asian men whatever the difference to the woman might be.
The only thing I dont agree totally with submale is over Julies motives for returning. No doubt she sees it as a sensible solution but she was reluctant it is Trey who having achieved his mission of marking her as his and knocking her up now wants her close by and available but not a drag on his lifestyle. She will simply go along with it and as such only in those circumstances will see the advantages of being with Richard. Cant wait to find out how the parents are told about this. The last few chapters have worked out surprisingly similar to what I imagined somewhat spookily and I hope this continues.
Anonymousover 12 years agoSubmale45 has given a well thought out analysis of what's happening with the story. Some seem to think that erotic writing means only graphic descriptions of sex acts. But there are other kinds of eroticism and what's happening in this story is that.
submale45over 12 years agoTo clarify my previous comments:
As someone who's followed this series, I don't understand why this chapter rates lowest. I found this chapter the most erotic so far among all the 21 chapters.
This chapter did something the rest of the chapters had built up to indirectly, but this chapter set that in stone.
First, about Trey: he's the character covered in maximum detail effectively, in the stories.
This chapter firmly sets him as the alpha male.
It's pretty clear that he satisfies Julie in sex like the wimp has never done, and can never dream of doing.
Not only does he satisfy her in sex, he fuels the primal, animal lust of the female who watches the alpha male defeat and dominate the 'man' she married.
Each time she sees Trey dominate her wimp husband, she can't help but feel the heat down there. She probably felt this the first time she saw her wimp husband wipe off the stud's sweat in the workout center, but most certainly we know she did when, the next day, the stud stuffed the wimp's face in his ass for the first time, in front of his wife. She probably couldn't wait to take Trey's seed deep in her, all the way, from that time onwards.
And now, Trey has established himself as the alpha male in the ultimate manner: he's knocked up Julie.
And having knocked up Julie, their attitude to the wimp reflect their plans for the future.
It's pretty clear that Julie wanted to be knocked up by Trey. Because she sees him as the alpha male.
It's also clear that Julie is a smart woman, and sees that Trey isn't as much a "provider" of a man as her wimp husband is. For all his wimpiness, and lack of manliness, and virility, he is a good provider. And she sees him as a good provider for her children: an excellent beta male. This is why she wants to move back in with her wimp husband.
Now, unlike in other possible alpha male beta male pregnancies, this one would be particularly more embarassing for the beta male because of the differences between Trey and the wimp. Trey's a black man, and the wimp and Julie are both white. There's no way the wimp could pass off the offspring as his own, without becoming the laughing stock of people around him. Wherever he goes with Julie and 'his' kid/kids, he would get knowing, pitying, snickering looks, like he got at the underwear shop.
But, the wimp already knows this. And the wimp knows in his deepest subconscious mind, that he can never be as masculine, strong, virile a man as Trey is. Trey is about half his age, and has fathered so many kids, the wimp knows he can't compete with Trey in virility..He knows, even if Julie gives him 'equal opportunity' to knock her up, there's no way he can compete with Trey. Not that he thinks Julie will give him equal opportunity, because he is conscious of the primal lust Julie feels for him. He knows the shrivelling effect Trey's domination has on his balls and penis. His chances of even having sex successfully with Julie are so small, the chances of him seeding some of her future offspring are very bleak.
And subconsciously, he has started adjusting for the likely future he's facing: raising Julie and Trey's offspring.
He obviously would have had a natural resistance to it, and 3 months before, had he been faced with the same prospect, he may have tried to get out with a divorce.
3 months of washing the alpha male's underwear have conditioned him to accepting his role as the beta male. He feels humiliated at the prospect of having to pass off clearly biracial offspring as his own,...but he will do it anyway...knowing how his balls and penis are shrivelling up.
And Trey obviously doesn't want to let up, he wants the wimp raising his babies with Julie. He's continuing the underwear washing 'training' exercises even after Julie moves back with the wimp.
These factors getting established in this chapter make it easily the most erotic of the 21 chapters in this series. It could get more erotic, but I think this chapter was the best of the lot so far.
Anonymousover 12 years agohey, i like erotic stories of all sorts but this is pretty fucked up. First off, their is no interracial love here at all, all you've written is racially based violence, s/m, prattle. Your so called superior male is a violent ex con bully, who makes kids he cares for not, and has no economic prospects whatsoever. So, oh yes, what an appealing figure for women to swoon for ... don't think so. Thus far the only normal people in the story are black women, they have nothing to do with the asshole. Go see a therapist, get help, stop resenting your colour.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI get this is a fantasy and it is make believe, but this author is a little touched in the head. The kink here is pure humilation, unrelentless, unadultrated, and unforgiving. Twenty One chapters and only one sex sence (which was pretty hot), but come on.
The statical split of 20 chapter of humilation too one chapter of sex means the author is getting a woody not on sex but being bullied. His fetish seems to be bullied by a black man. In pursuit of this fantasy, he has constructed a protangist of mythical proportion. Trey is the "magical super negro man" endowed with not merely a big cock and swagger, but superpower and super streotypes.
Not only does he enslave an entire condo with magical padded speedos, he has all the hallmarks of preverse comic book black thug. He's served some hard time and his choice of mary jay is "philly blunts." Think about it, Trey and his crew smokes Blunts!!!
I can only imagine how this guy handles him self in the real world. I kinda peg him as a mid level manager in a big corporation that thinks $75K a year is a lot of money. But hell, he could be anybody. All I know is whatever trigger his little obsession about interracial humilation most definitely has fuck up his personal life. We all have our little turn on, but it must suck to be you.
All jokes and complaints aside, Trey is a pretty hot character that I can relate too. And while I can live without the racism and racial fantasy's, I do enjoy the depiction of a strong and powerful male, especial one who is sexual powerful. Let just say, fucking women into submission while their husband's watch you is pretty hot. Hell, we all have our crosses to bear in the perve department.
So, weak white wimp while you delve into your sissy fetish, could you give us "real men" a little more of Trey working his mojo.
BFG85over 12 years agoHe loves these stories, don't you cuckboy? I'm sure your wife has a steaming hot creampie present for you go eat before it gets cold.
