All Comments on 'Black Pearls - Unity'

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kinkykayekayekinkykayekayealmost 9 years ago
Interesting

This is a very interesting story line. I look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Something different, very imaginative

When I first started reading this, I wasn't sure I was interested enough to read to the end. But Unity, in her non-human but still fundamentally decent behavior, hooked me. Please keep on going - I appreciate the fantasy world that has been created, and am curious to discover how the relationship between Shella and Lilith (now that she's much more than a ship) will evolve.

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