All Comments on 'Black Rose Pt. 01'

Interesting premise and characters. Seems like you've set up for a multi-part series here, so I'm looking forward to future instalments.

You've got me hooked, PLEASE continue!

Story was a 5 until they got to his room. Went to -5 with the rape. No seduction to me just a glossed up rape.

Great start I hope you continue, getting very interesting 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

This was a really promising beginning to an interesting premise of undercover work meets transgender porn, and if it keeps going this way, I think I’ll fall in love with it :3

This story can become addictive,I mean a Nerd gets super intelligence and gets a Transgender Handler/Girlfriend that is sexually attracted to the Nerd and actually wants to be with him fulltime after she fucks him so good.Obviously this first part is such a cock teaser this has to have a continuation,I can't wait for more seriously.

Great job! You are a great author! Keep up the good work!

I loved Chuck and just about everything you write so this can become a match made in heaven. While I definitely enjoyed the premise, I didn’t feel invested in either of your characters or believe in their connection to each other. Looking forward to this being continued to see if that changes. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Awesome story! Love all your stories. Favorite Author!!

Really liked this chapter, interesting sci-fi and setup with the futinari.

Consistent spelling of her name would be a nice touch.

So, is this story going to continue, or is that it now he's been fucked?

Personally I'd love to see the sci-fi story develop.

Strand

Not bad, could use a little more depth, but a good start to a potentially interesting longer thread

I love how it progresses, would definitely like to see it continues

I like this story.

I think you should try and slow down the pace, though. This story is interesting, but it's moving at such a quick pace that I didn't have time to absorb any of it. If you take more time with the events and let me truly see what Ben saw, each beat (Ben meeting Alessandra and transferring the encrypted data, Ben receiving the chip by mistake and meeting Alessandra properly, Alessandra deciding to infiltrate his life at his friend's expense, Ben getting topped by Alessandra) would have a lot more significance.

I'd ditch her using a fake name. Alessandra [Fakelastname] would work and it'll save you a lot of effort as well as the reader. I hope you pick it back up!

Please share the rest of this story.