All Comments on 'Black Sheep Pt. 03'

And the plot thickens!!!!

LEGGO!!!!

More!! Please!!

another great chapter. sooo good! i'm starting to like henry a bit more now lol.

To want isthar to be linc? I love him so much more than Christopher.

Great chapter.

I enjoy your writing but find mysef frustrated in the direction it's clearly going. We haven't had much background in Chrissy so it's harder to identify with him and that feels intentional. And Linc is just manipulative and won't take responsibility for his actions in the past or present day. Idk how I feel about him but good job writing overall!

" I enjoy your writing but find myself frustrated in the direction it's clearly going. We haven't had much background in Chrissy so it's harder to identify with him and that feels intentional."

I agree.

I would like to hear from Chrissy, I don't think he is oblivious to the obvious tension between Ishtar and Linc. I can't really sympathize with Linc. I honestly don't think he is as innocent as you are making him seem.

Also Ishtar, babe, please come clean cause this is going to blow in your face.

I am finding hard to read some of these stories because they aren't worth my time but this story is amazing please keep writing I don't want this story to disappear

Hey there.

In case anyone cares, I was really hoping to post Chapter 4 in a few hours but I've been so busy and it's still not edited. I know it's been a while since Chapter 3, sorry about that. I know how frustrating it is to wait for a story. I swear the next one is on its way. I was aiming for 10k words but right now I'm sitting at 10.5k and I've got a little further to go. But I'm working at it.

Thanks for all the love. I appreciate the criticism too. ❤

And I eagerly await part 4!!!