All Comments on 'Blackedmerica: A Love Story Ch. 02'

by eeric

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AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 7 years ago
Entertaining. Great effort!

Love the story xoxoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Love this story

I really enjoy the world you are building here and especially enjoying the point of view from the white boys, its like I'm living in this world, I cant wait for the next chapter and hopefully many more after that

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Loved this entry! Please write more!

The exchange between the two entertainment newscasters was jarring but no big deal.

Also loved the whole breastfeeding scene. I can't wait to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
REALLY EXCELLENT WORK!!!!!!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! truly awesome!!! hope theres more Soon!!! great work all together!!!! rally great

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Needs an editor

There are a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes in this story. You should really go through the forums and ask for some editing help before posting.

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