All Comments on 'Blackmailed'

Great job making it better and better through only partial releif in the story, making each encounter more realistic and more exciting. You got the fever and the pitch of it just right. Hope you finish it.

Terribly written, I could not make it through half of the first page. The tenses kept switching and the plot, from what I could see, was somewhat unrealistic.

Too many typo's or wrong words used or just plain bad writing. Proofread, Proofread, Proofread...then let someone else proofread it for you. I lost interest halfway through the first page - stumbling too much over your words, or lack thereof. No rating from me.

What a shit! :))

Excellent story

This must be the worst story on this site. Absolute shit writing.