by Slutygirl199
I usually can read around poor editing, but this one forced too many stops just to figure out what was said.
Meh...I didn't care for the spanking. I also didn't like that Dean has decided to show all of the videos with his friends. π Incest is too intimate to be shared indiscriminately like that.
I'm also not buying into the premise that Dean could get away with screwing Ava while their parents are home. She was making lots of noise throughout their tryst.
Lots of spelling and grammar mistakes too. 3/5