All Comments on 'Blackmailed By Unknown'

Well, I liked it until the stepfather thing came into focus. It would have been better if the guy remained unknown and later continued with his blackmail. Or maybe there will be further blackmail and the girl will be used again and again. A good start to further chapters if the author wants to continue; or it could just stand on its own. I do like the thoughts and actions that the girl was experiencing. She was thrilled a little bit but was berating herself for being so stupid. Where/how did her stepfather find out about her picture? How/where was he during this night when he was supposed to be with her mother on an adventure of their own? Is her mother in on this deception and blackmail? So many options for the author to pursue.

Awesome as always! Love the stepfather twist at the end!

only one problem with the ending; is she saying that her stepfather, the engineer is the only male that wears that type of aftershave'/ YOMEYO

Now step father can take great pleasure into controlling his stepdaughters fall into slutty submission.

Nice

for such an over the top, instant transformation, it's VERY well written! almost believable, I could almost feel myself in her place.

it would have been more believable if it happened over weeks and not minutes, but that's not the story. and.. VERY WELL DONE. thank you.