by ArkansASS
Sorry to say, but this story isn't even legal. High School freshman, makes the male out to be at most 15 years old, and that's pushing it.
Unless this is a rewrite and nothing is said about that fact then their ages are appropriate as seniors which it says in the first paragraph is right. I would definitely like to read more about their exploits as I'm sure you could come up with more.
Eh. Good idea but you took us for a great ride and dropped us off in the middle of nowhere. You really should think about expanding this story or finish it in a sequel. Great idea and a great start. 4 stars for the idea, but onli 2.5 at best for the rest. Very average but could be outstanding with a little work. Good luck!