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by rpickman

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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 5 years ago
And the purpose is

What is the reason for a story having multiple chapters when it is purely a jerkoff vignette. There was nothing here to hook me to bother waiting for more.

You need to start a story, especially a longer one with a purpose or objective. Some drama based on a resistance to attain that objective should also be introduced.

A simple fuck is not a story.

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