by gizm4c
I agree with prostock and am on my way to the next chapter to say how it went and goes hehe
I'm very interested in seeing how this goes. I think Blaine gave some good advice to Trey about trying to either resolve the issues between he and Gage or finding answers so he can have closure and move on.
However, I think it's unrealistic for two men to have a long distant relationship where they only see each other a few times a year. Of course he's going to "cheat." I couldn't do it.
I really like this so far. One suggestion, however, is to use contractions more often in dialogue. Few people say "I am" instead of "I'm." Other than that, you have a great start. I also liked the disclaimer at the top. I love romances that build slowly! Don't hurry yourself.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe a bit longer though? <vbg>
i wonder what did blaine experienced in his previous relationship which not good as he said it
first chapter! i'm really looking forward to the next ch. and seeing where it goes :D
Uchena
*laugh* I'm like Amber, I can't wait to see where this goes.