All Comments on 'Blame it on James Brown'

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Comentarista82Comentarista82over 3 years ago
Quite the tune

Thanks for sharing Daniel's angst, growing pains, meeting Dixie, then being mature enough to let her go--especially to such a fine man like Bernie. I believe that's the first time I've read any IR tale having that for a twist--but such an unexpected and altruistic one at that!

Loved the slow seduction from Dixie, the rich detail of them joining, and the unsuspecting breakup. However, I'd love to see you write a sequel with Daniel and Norma, as Norma seems more than willing to replace Dixie...but this time, it wouldn't be with Norma being attached. Please consider doing this.

I rated it a 5. Thanks for a well-described and rich tale of romance. She did sound like an ebony goddess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
NIce!

I loved this story so much! The slow build was awesome. Now, I want to hear about him and Norma. Could you do that for me? LOL

Horseman68Horseman68over 3 years ago
Excellent.

Great story. Really enjoyed the read. Bravos.

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Very very Romantique!

11/10 James Brown LPs!!!!!

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