by orangecurious
Very well done, the sodomizing was excellent, the twist at the end hilarious.
The end of the story REALLY MAKES NO SENSE AT ALL!How on Earth could she not know the mobile phone number OF HER OWN FATHER when YOU ALONE wrote that she had the mobile number of her father among her contacts?!And if her father had another mobile phone with another number,THERE WAS SIMPLY NO WAY IN WHICH ANY PHONE COULD HAVE HAD "AUTO-FILLED THE CONTACT"!STOP WRITING SUCH TOTALLY UNREALISTIC THINGS because THIS STORY IS DEFINITELY NOT a "slow,gorgeous,sensual masterclass in eroticism",or "awesome",but ONLY AN AVERAGE and RATHER DULL STORY,with AN UNREALISTIC AND NONSENSICAL(ABSOLUTELY NOT "hilarious") END!
Ah, another fine comment by an ANONYMOUS USER! Do you know, by heart, a contact number? I don't, they are held in the phone. Your phone tells you who is calling, etc. so you don't have to remember numbers.
How about you actually have some guts and put a name to your comments. better still, write something of your own, although judging by the writing in your comment, it won't be very good. Thank you anyway. have a nice day... blah blah blah.
The end of the story REALLY MAKES NO SENSE AT ALL!How on Earth could she not know the mobile phone number OF HER OWN FATHER when YOU ALONE wrote that she had the mobile number of her father among her contacts?!And if her father had another mobile phone with another number,THERE WAS SIMPLY NO WAY IN WHICH ANY PHONE COULD HAVE HAD "AUTO-FILLED THE CONTACT"!STOP WRITING SUCH TOTALLY UNREALISTIC THINGS because THIS STORY IS DEFINITELY NOT a slow,gorgeous,sensual masterclass in eroticism,or awesome,but ONLY AN AVERAGE and RATHER DULL STORY,with AN UNREALISTIC AND NONSENSICAL(ABSOLUTELY NOT hilarious) END!
The story was masterfully written, imaginative, reminiscent of “Eyes Wide Shut” and quite enthralling. The twist at the end left me well but flabbergasted as I had to reconcile my feelings with what I imagined the character felt.. and all the repercussions. I DO and definitely DON’T want to know more lol… gawd what a ride. I’ll be reading more of you work sir.
thank you, Hydran.
I am still debating if Nancy is ready for another party yet!
It *was* a good story until the last word. I get it that you clearly wanted to write a story about anonymous fucking and that you did, but for crying out loud tag your stories with incest in the future. The story *was* five stars, but it turned into one star with those last three letters.
Literotica offers great tagging options, use them, please.