All Comments on 'Blame It on the Water'

Well done! Nice to read something like this because these days all we seem to get is shit on Lit.

Thanks...a very good read..There is a lot of real lousy writing getting trough lately. This is not one of them..

Very clean, extra hot and wet as can be. Rock on!

"...ushered from her lips." What kind of nonsense is that? Am I supposed to use my imagination to translate that mismatch of words? There are other manglings of English and loads of various errors. All very distracting. Those of us who know how writing can and should be are continually criticized here, but this many errors detracts from being able to enjoy the story.

Very well done. I loved it! If you ever do a sequel, I'm sure it will be fantastic.

The little writing errors didn't bother me.<p>

That mom sure did though. Loved how she untied her bikini bottoms without the son knowing. Loved how she then pullled them off. Mmmm.

Now that was a fun way to spend a boat ride. Sexily written story with an air of authenticity - making it hightly erotic. I for one and hoping for a sequel! Bravo!

Consider using a volunteer editor for future stories. They might catch some of the errors and choice of words which detracted. The visual would have been better if you'd described mom even a little. How old was she? Hair color / length? Height / body type? Full lips? etc.

Read some of Ahabscribe (who commented earlier) for how to write top notch incest.

Write a sequel NOW, or even a series please. That was so hot and mom loves her cock so much I think she ought to have a series now.

I do love some of the longer stories but this was a pleasant change. quick, dirty, and HOT! Did notice a couple of typos, but you know what, most stories have em if you look for it so no big deal in my book.

and i'll be honest, that guy down there cracked me up. "ushered from ... lips" is a phrase. don't let it discourage you.

HOT HOT HOT

write chapter 2 please ...

thanks

Sunny

Great story. Not much description on appearances but it left it open for my imagination. Thanks for the story. Hope there will be a chapter 2.

thanks for your effort

Please finish this story off with a couple of sequels, it's REALLY good!

broo

write a book

Absoloutly brilliant, it felt so real reading it I could almost think that it was me. Got any more similar stories, get them done asap.

i loved the story it made me fell like i was on the boat a sequel is a must it would be an amazing adition to see how they act and take on rheir relationship from here great story kepp em coming

As always, I loved it. That's I'll say for now. ~ Scarletta

It was one of the best stories, i`ve ever read. Please get ur stories published man... u`ve got awesome writing skills...

it was a superb yarn hope you have more of these.

That was an incredible story, thanks.

That was an amazing story!!! Please write more! Something along those lines would be fantastic!

I would love to read a sequel to this story, I loved the way you wrote in a steady building rhythm.

That was an awsome short story.

You should write a longer version of this too.

Definitely needs a couple of sequels!

Scribbleskillz, you've just got to continue and get Tommy's sperm INSIDE his mom. That's a must! Do make a Part 3.

Maybe she needs some more

I loved it.

Please equal it with another.

i adore theses types of stories of accidental sex with no true intentions before hand

I had fun reading it :)

I've read this probably 6 times over the last year. I love the suddenness of their desire & the apprehension leading up to his dick sliding in his mother. It's just hot!

The storm added to the erotic nature of the story, this mother and son were bound to have sex, the storm, being in th cabin made for a highly charged incest action. Good!

The father prefers the excitement of the storm and the love of his boat . The mother needs really hot sex , and the son is horny . All the elements are there for a complete series including a permanent mother son relationship .

Those are words plenty of boys'd love to hear from their mother! The author of this excellent story, who's around 30 years old, is highly talented, very prolific, and remarkably generous (check out his Favorites). His hot balls are stimulated by the idea of a boy shoving his stiff young prick up his mother's mommy-hole (I bet he was hard when he wrote this story). That wonderful hairy hole between their mother's legs fascinates lots of boys. They'd love to explore it with their fingers and lips and tongue, best of all with their big hard cock. A mother's cunt is the nature-given receptacle for all the warm creamy semen in her boy's young balls, as more and more boys--and their moms--are discovering every day. A boy's stiff prick and his mother's wet twat--a perfect match!

I love when sex develops that way-hot writing-good story

Nur das Ende ist etwas unplausibel. Wie kann die Mutter diesen Positionswechsel schaffen, wo doch das Boot so heftig schlingert?

Awesome story!

But the end is a little implausible. How can the mother succeed in managing this change of position, while the boat s rolling so hefty?

I love the mom-son stories. Very innovative plot.

Great Job ,Superb Story

I really enjoyed this, got my motor running. Will take the time to read more of your stories. Excellent writing. 5*****

This story really got my attention and complete focus. WHEW..... I look forward to reading more of your work. Excellent wordsmithing. Thanks,

GREAT STORY! PLEASE DO A SEQUEL.LET THEM HAVE ALL THEY WANT. LONG,DEEP,WET,AND WIDE! PULL OUT ALL THE STOPS.SEARCH YOUR BRAIN FOR EVERY FILTHY, DISGUSTING, WONDERFUL THING A MAN AND A WOMAN CAN DO TO EACH OTHER. LOOK FORWARD TO READING A SEQUEL.

Yes, mid-life crisis, there is no other explanation. It could not be it that he wanted yacht since he was kid.

As we kissed, our mouths opened, and our tongues reached out to each others. I pulled mom to me tightly, smasher her tits against my chest. As we moved from the chair down to the floor, I moved on top of my mother. The storm wouldn't last forever, so there was no time to waste. My cock was completely hard again as we resumed our passionate kissing, I raised my hips slightly, moving my cockhead into position, I pushed into my mom's pussy once again. I began thrusting hard, and fast, as our breaths exploded into each others mouths. Needing more air, our mouths separated as our intensity increased. "Oh god mom, I can't get enough of your hot pussy!" I yelled. With our pelvis's pounding together, mom started having another orgasm. "Oh god Tommy, you're going to make me cum again!" my mother shouted. "Oh yes, oh yes, fuck me with that big cock Tommy!" "Oh yes, oh god, oh god, oh honey, oh, oh, oh, oh, ooooooooooooh yeeeeeeeees!!!"

Love mom and son stories 5

so good till the end..he didn't get to cum in her pussy...from a 5 to a 3 star story...shit!

man,my cock was so freakin hard from reading this......

on the oft visited Mom sits on my lap while Dad drives the car theme. The use of the stormy ocean to get the action moving is a worthy device. If the author is inclined to revisit this couple there will be at least one happy reader.

I loved this story I was so hard reading it. I think there could a 2nd chapter.

One of the shortest, but great story, I've read in a long time. Right to the point. Everything fell right into place.

AND cum belongs there too. big turn off not Cumming in her pussy... lost the erotic touch...

Loved it! As a sailor, I have many fantasies related to boats and family members. Mostly about my niece in her bikini at the wheel while I teach her to pilot... Anyway, loved it and the ending, cumming in Mom's mouth after fucking her, hot. This one is perfect for a second chapter. Thanks for another hot one.

to come that close to cumming where cum belongs, (in a pussy) then get hit with a bucket of cold water. blow jobs MEH...

and well written story. very sexy. mostly a long tease. 5 stars!

Should of held your mom down on your cock cum in her cunt got her knocked up with your kid in her

Wonderful tale. Thank you.

Great story.... I wish he had cum inside :-)

Damn!

HOT! HOT! HOT!! Well done!!

I felt as if I were with my mother again except I climaxed inside of my mother. So realistic for me. Old faded memories became vivid. Thank you

Loses a point for pulling out. Good sexy build up only to falter at the finish line. When it's the first time, cum belongs in a pussy! After that, you can mix it up. Not every author understands this, but it's never too late to learn.

Hello!

Fresh off the wonderful and very meaningful story of Dani and Richie, I am humbled once again with this wonderful creation of windblown love aboard a vessel piloted by a jackass of a father. (Any good captain would welcome other pairs of eyes on the bridge, to help keep track of things in a situation like a gale on the Pacific.)

Who thoughtfully has enough insight to allow his wife to be properly and excitingly loved by her adoring son, who is spellbound by her delicious feminine curvature as highlighted by her fashionable swimwear.

Mother/son incest is my very favorite, and this tale of love in the salon of a boat gripped in the teeth of a rising gale off the coast of California is seriously delicious and satisfying.

Oh, how I long to be that lucky son!

His mother sounds very exciting in her desirability, especially while ensconced in the forced situation of the son holding his lovely shapely mother, her sexy bottom plunked down firmly in his hungry lap, to keep her safe from physical danger. (As any good son would......)

I REALLY hope you write a sequel!!

If so, be sure to include a segment where they find themselves together in private, and as the son holds his mother close in a passionate embrace, kisses her with slow, purposeful, wet lipped kisses, and tells her how much she captivates him with her succulent femininity as he softly runs his fingers through her pretty hair, and tells her how much she means to him before they again abandon themselves to another episode of slow wonderful love making.

Maybe this loving scene could happen in the luxurious master stateroom bed on board the boat over satin sheets and a sexy teddy, while dear old dad, somewhere across town in a drunken stupor, picks at his anal scabs and barks the hole of an spastic weimaraner in the trunk of an AMC Gremlin out back behind Irving's taxidermy, welding shop and vaginal rejuvenation clinic while drinking Tall Toad beer, huffing starting fluid and snorting lines of chopped up pringles potatoe chips!

Sincerely,

B4PW.

The story is not good ..... the story is great .... a sequel would be worth a 10 !

More than 5 stars. Awesome story

Fresh take on the "Mommy Sits on my Lap" story (most stories took place inside a car/bus). This was hoooot. Though i agree that creampie should have occurred.