All Comments on 'Blame the Gas'

This was excellent! So very colourful. Will be reading more from you now.

sounds like an episode of the twilight zone or something like that.

An enjoyable quick story and is quite erotic in spots.

It's a great idea. But it needed more sex. And detailed sex. It was a great setup but then the big act didn't follow.

you did well for your first story in this genre you should add a chapter 2 so we can see what happened to the parents when they returned home and maybe have more details in the sex scene

Thanks, Kaidman, but I wasn't intending to continue this particular storyline. If I return to this setting, it'll be through the interactions of other couples. (Maybe a story in Gay Male?)

(As a side note, my personal reasoning for the parents not being home is that they're dead or seriously hurt. The mother worked in a bakery, and when the gas hit, she was too distracted to notice when a fire started. The father was driving at the time, so he merely crashed his car. Since I didn't include this morbid information in the story, you can take it as canon or not, at your discretion.)