All Comments on 'Blank Slate Holidays'

Fantastic! Memories must slowly come back with time - hopefully!

I haven’t seen this plot line before. You did very well and you know how sometimes dreams come to the forefront and maybe, just maybe come true.

That was a very original plot and a great excuse to cram a lot of sex into a short space of time. I really enjoyed it.

also wildly implausible

I don't recall seeing a story quite like this before. It was enjoyable, and I wouldn't mind a sequel.

Really appreciate it when people find time to write. I've worked on this story on-and-off for about 3 months, so sorry if details change over time (hair length etc)

I am grateful for all feedback.

I am curious about what exactly is so stupid? Can the poster give more details about what they find idiotic? Is it the premise, or the writing style?

As for "homo trumps incest " , I would disagree.

One is legal in 90% of countries around the world, and is generally not considered a taboo. The other is illegal or forbidden basically everywhere and is considered a taboo. I know which one I consider needs more warning!

In general, if you have read my other work, you might already know that I try to find different or unusual reasons for incest. For example, my Virus series discusses incest to save a life. The Temple of the Godess is about religious incest. This was about accidental incest under amnesia.

I'm sorry if you feel I didn't present that well.

sequel please! I loved the story line and the hot sex.

First: My compliments for a completely new & original idea!

Second: I enjoyed your writing style- marred only by the odd typo.

Third: You have a vocabulary, & aren't afraid to use it! ;^)

Fourth: I cannot, for the life of me, understand WHY, in the name of REASON, anyone would PAY for a vacation they WOULD NOT REMEMBER! The whole point of a vacation is to rest, relax, and MAKE NEW MEMORIES!

That aside, it was still an entertaining story. I encourage you, in every way I know, to keep writing!

I'd immensely enjoy a 2nd chapter to this story, but that my friend, is completely up to you.

I wholly concur with Anonymous (6 months ago) re:

Fourth: I cannot, for the life of me, understand WHY, in the name of REASON, anyone would PAY for a vacation they WOULD NOT REMEMBER! The whole point of a vacation is to rest, relax, and MAKE NEW MEMORIES!

And a second part would be keen.

Five stars again!!! Would totally sign up for this travel agency

Great twist on total recall them. Enjoyed the story and yes the possibly of a return colud be great read

I loved the premise. I have long felt a desire to write about family. So far my fantasies have put it to step family. I do like this Blank State Holiday idea. I might drop a toe in one day.

The whole thing was totally unemotional and sterile. Not erotic at all . . . .