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by GuessImJamie

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blackkat46220blackkat46220over 4 years ago

I think you're missing the last page...lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Big words

Its kinda of a turn off to read medical terms in smut, great story line. Need the rest of the

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Work On Your Dialogue!

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KlitomaticKlitomaticover 2 years ago

Lose the clinical, spend more time on description and work on dialogue. Just don't quit, the story has promise. Oh, and longer, way longer...

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Born and raised in a tiny town fictionalized as Erewhon (from Samuel Butler's 1872 send-up of Victorian culture) outside Lubbock Texas, Christian, Texan, Mother, Grandmother, Business Owner, Pilot (type ratings for HU-16, E-jet, DC-8, F-27, L-188, DC-6, C-46), Polyamorous Love...