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All Comments on 'Bless Me Father, For I Have Sinned Ch. 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Couldn't take it anymore

I made it about half way through the first page of this story and I couldn't take your use of the characters names after every other sentence. Nicole , and Steve. Hey, we got it after about the fifth time in every other sentence. Nicole and Steve. I really believe that this is one hot story but you ruined it by your constant use of the names. Too bad. Sorry but I can't take anymore, it's driving me insane. 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A Dream Again!

Fool me once with a dream, I’ll still give chapter 2 a try.

Fool me twice and bye-bye.

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Hello. I am back! I suddenly got that itch again. Right now I started writing a new challenging story. I have it published on Chyoa.com. I will be posting it here as well. I have been here for 20 years and I love to still hear your feedback. I hope everyone says hello sometime!