All Comments on 'Blessed'

You never fail to create beautiful characters and wonderful love stories! Keep writing, please!

An incredible story and it goes without saying I love Beulah. Bee is an A+ in my book.

I am in awe of your work! I was incredibly excited to read another so soon. Bee is a wonderful character, whilst Julie is so dear and perfect for Bee. Job well done my dear.

LP

Love stories are always wonderful, and this is no exception! Well done! Thank you for sharing this with us!

wish you didn't keep calling Bee an 'old dyke' Must be a less derogatory term available.

Nice to have someone like her in a story, instead of always the young and beautiful.

I really enjoyed the story, but calling Bee an old dyke really got on my nerves.

It's good overall but calling Bee the old dyke, mannish, and homely as many times as you could seem to was really off putting. Butch women are NOT ugly, manly women by default just because they're butch and it's pretty derogatory for you to word your story suggesting those things. Otherwise it was enjoyable

I loved the story, from start to finish. Really sweet and romantic but please tone down the "ugly dyke" thing you got going on. Butch does not mean ugly at all!

well it is your story, your narrative

and i enjoy a good love story,

as for the negative comments for the

for using the old dyke, forget about them

it was a lovely story

i hope you write more..........

thank you

I enjoyed the story but was pretty put off by the constant old dyke references.

This might be unpopular but i don't mind the use of the word 'dyke' at all, if it's reclaimed by a lesbian it can be rather sexy.

On another note this is much a wonderful story, the romance of the two women and the atmosphere you've set around them is so intricate and aesthetically pleasing. I would LOVE to see Bee take Julie to an old fashioned lesbian bar. I demand a sequel!!!

A different approach to the butch theme. Tender one. Really interesting and well done. I liked it. Thank you

I love both characters! I understand why nervous and self-deprecating. But they are lucky enough to find their soulmate. It’s a beautiful story!

baby