All Comments on 'Blind Date'

Very nice. All 5 for you.

Nice little journey into an enjoyable night after a blind date. I could use some more of these characters, should you be inclined. If not, thanks for sharing!

Great story. Would love to hear what happens next. Perhaps they call his sister the next morning while still in bed! Lol. Thanks for sharing!

Some interaction with his sister would cap this story. Well developed and simple enjoyable tale..

One of the BEST stories I have read on Literotica. How about a PART 2?

Nice Story, just simply not realistic.

In a few short strokes you paint extremely attractive characters. The interchange with the sister at the beginning was an effective hook. And the 3-word concluding sentence followed by the ellipses I'm coming to recognize as your trademark. A very satisfying vignette. 5 stars.

Even so, you would benefit from a skilled editor. You persistently misused the transitive verb "lay" (in its various permutations -- lay/laying/laid/laid) where the context and syntax required the intransitive verb "lie" (lie/lying/lay/lain).

Excellent!

Nice story but the condom was a buzzkill for me. I know the condoms are important, for birth control and STD protection, but they kind of suck in erotica ( my opinion only). I guess a counterpoint could be made that normalizing condom wearing is good, but I've always found them desensitizing, I rather skip PIV than deal with a condom. Maybe they are better now? I used them years and years ago, and they sucked.