by Joeehartley
Great way to start a relationship at a mature age. Thanks for sharing.
As a senior who generally enjoys these stories, have to give this one a five star rating.
More “ believable” than most, and well written to boot. Hope there are more of this ilk.
And - thanks for a great Sunday morning read!
I read your other new one and enjoyed the kicker at the end. Now I see you did it again. Nice touch and a very enjoyable short story. It deserved the five I gave it.
If someone says something use quotes and write as speech. The early part read as though jenifer was concerned at what he said about himself not staying at home. Although I think you meant she thought he shouldn't be home.
Who is Kelly?
Then the young checkout girl changed to be his granddaughter.
Got a bit confusing at the start.
a wonderfull short Romp. The story is well balanced and a good tale of love when it see like time is gone for it
thank you
Highly recommend this to most all "seniors", "aloners" .... socializing is far better then squandering lives at home alone and stagnant. Please, extend this into a longer series.
Another home run, great story, lots of possibilities for a series, Thanks for sharing.
Well done! The continuation should have legs. I hope you or another inspired senior will fill in “the rest of the story.” Thanks