by mystikvixen
I could pick up the chemistry between the two characters immediately. Can't wait for more!
Looks good, can't wait for the next part and getting me horny!
Sue from UK xx
Please, you just cann't stop there. There has got to be more to this. Keep going. John B.
THIS IS A VERY GOOD STORY AND MANY WILL ENJOY READING IT TO THE END OF CHAPTER 8. UNFORTUNATELY, THAT IS WHERE THE AUTHOR LEFT IT UNFINISHED. WE DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH ONLY HAFT THE STORY TO READ. IT'S DISAPPOINTING TO SEE IT'S INCOMPLETE.