All Comments on 'Blindfolded Daddy'

Please write some more stories.

Jess needs to introduce a 'friend' so the 3 of them can have sex together.

Sometime the blindfold needs to come off so he can accept Liz.

But I'm really disappointed in her friend. Maybe some contrition when she wakes up? A trip for a plan B?

That was beyond hot. You got talent as a writer and a very dirty mind. You are going on my list. Five fucking stars!!!!

Maybe Dad can find out and "punish" both girls/ Also, is Liz gonna be pregnant?

Loved it! So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Great story, but you need and editor......NOBODY should EVERserve Chardonnay with pizza!! What is wrong with you???? Lol

Super hot and crying out for a sequel!

The best story I've read here in months, brilliant, thank you.

How many times can I go incognito to give this 5 ⭐?

So far, six. But I keep drifting back to do it again..

Thanks for all the nice comments - they encourage me to keep writing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

This was the hottest think since , well , the sun ! Excellent pace , gives that tortuously slow build then erupts climaxing hard and leaving you satisfied ! Great writing , by a skilled craftsman !

Great story. Liked how there wasnt 3 pages of back story..

What else is there to say? Great build up and fanfuckingtastic! I was just surfing Lit tonight and found this story. So glad I did. I'll be back to read the rest! Just one question: fantasy or fact??? :--)

@Bracton54: Thanks, I quite often like to start the action early too, and I'm happy with the pace on this one. :)

@Anonymous: Pure fantasy, I'm afraid. I'm neither a girl nor a former baseball pro. ;-D

superb story-telling, exciting prose, and the dialogue, descriptions, I thought perhaps you peaked too soon with blindfold in the title but nope, not at all. I'll be re-reading this one a couple of times, nice job!

I like your thinking. This story needs another chapter. Jess needs her comeuppance. Revenge is best served wet.

Loved this story! Hope there’s another chapter!

Many great parts to thing. Wonderfully done and the cream pie gets me every time.

GOOD READ

Great story, we need more.

Good writing can't wait for part 2

Pretty hot <3

Super hot! I'd love to see you explore the impregnation side of the encounter more. You do a great job of that in the bro/sis one you did recently too.

Part 2 please!

Very HOT! Great descriptions of the action. Nice characterization of the participants also. A perfect erotic, arousing story.

The story started off pretty great, but the escalation was too quick. Would have enjoyed if it was in a more realistic pace.

Very enjoyable read! A great jack of story with little dross. This goes into my favorite’s pile.

Very well done without all the distractions but still a complete tale. 5 Stars.

Bill S.

Extremely hot 🔥

I loved it , a bit of sex with a lot of humour. Great story but unusual . I suppose she'll be down the pharmacy for the morning after pill .

Beautifully characterised friendship between the two horny teenagers. I’ll be coming to this over and over