All Comments on 'Bliss'

Fun read of the normal post cosmic sex. The discussion afterwards was normal

Thanks

I removed a part of the note from the author at the beginning, so now the whole story fits on one page, just like I wanted it to.

corrections: massaging her "things" (you mean thighs). between "in" (it) and her slit locked to the one she loved. delete "the most" implies she loves others also. make me the toasts just the way I like them. Should be "make me toast just just the way I like it"

Thanks for proofreading, I really should put more effort into it myself before I publish the next story. I submitted the edit, which should be live in around two weeks.

Adorable!