All Comments on 'Blizzard'

i liked the story, it flowed well, felt natural and not forced like many stories. I like your writing style, you clearly know what your doing, only criticism i would offer is your lack of details with the actual sex. the went from being spanked, to look a dp, in a paragraph. i would flesh it out, give it some attention to details, describe what there doing, how she reacts, her expressions, internal monologue (I really was expecting one with this story, felt a bit disappointed its not there).

Brings a new meaning to buyer beware. The devil is in the details. Very well done

... the dangerous inadequacies of safe words and safety conditions. Of course the slut getting spanked and fucked got me excited. Five stars!

I would have rather been blackmailed because of her employer’s strong religious beliefs and the videos of her active participation, she agrees and spends the next few days till the roads clear, being waitress next door, wearing only stockings and heels.