All Comments on 'Blizzard Ch. 03'

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Three installments without any sex will probably cause your rating to take a hit... But don't let that affect your writing!! I, and others, will continue to enjoy the show building character Dynamics. Kudos!

please

I am a big fan of your writing but I am not a fan of one page stories. I'd rather see a bit longer between chapters and get more story per chapter than short one-page segments.

Engaging

Perhaps I should wait until there are enough chapters to read. It helps if the tag line changes with each chapter, so the reader can know if it’s a new chapter or where to start if they might have missed a submission or two. I look forward to learning more about the girls.

How is this Mind Control? So far, it just seems like a group of scheming girls conspiring to seduce a resisting man that they're all crushing on. Which is a great premise, but the category doesn't make sense to me. The only way it makes sense is if the girls are the ones being mind-controlled. My current theory is that Faye is the magical one and she desires to reward Gene for saving her, so she's setting him up with a harem of three college girls.

Regardless, I'm very much enjoying this and looking forward to the next installment

I don't see the mind control either but I'm enjoying it enough that I don't care. I'm eager for more.

Im guessing faye is the mind control part

Entertaining, but confusing...