by redsliver
You're writing style seriously sucks, difficult to follow, plot makes ZERO fucking sense. You should hire a tutor or stop writing. Your works are serious garbage.
I get that these aren't Oprah best sellers, but wow do your stories suck. Waste of time, avoid unless you want an anurysim.
Rather than hiding behind an anonymous post....what's that about? 😏
Build up is good, want to see it start moving along now though.
I like the tease, and slow pace. I also get that Winter is manipulating everything.
Try to ignore the haters. Everyone has their preference. The funny thing is that I’d have thought this slow deliberate pacing wasn’t mine but I’m enjoying it very much. Please keep up the good work but keep in mind that I’m home with nothing else to do but wonder where is the next installment... thank you for your work and your efforts.
Let me get this straight. You think this, and all the author's stories, are terrible and a waste of time. Correct? And yet, here you are. This is chapter six in this arc. So my question; is your idiocy congenital or do you have to work at it?
You bring nothing to the table.
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Great a story about a normal guy with a dad bod, trying to do the right thing.