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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
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I have enjoyed your tale so far but, we are now seven pages in and I haven't figured out where the mind control comes into play. Maybe this should have been First Time?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Pretty sure the fairy that Gene helped in the first chapter is the one setting this all up. I doubt all of these girls are behaving their usual selves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Any plot left?

Just wondering.

MarkT63MarkT63almost 2 years ago

Each girl has a special talent.

Smartest1Smartest110 months ago

Very funny tale. Gene didnt stand a chance.

The idea of the 3-1 waitress is from another story. Coming to think about that, in there it's also 3 students with 1 guy. There is a lot of snow(storms). There is (yet to come?) an adversary (the neighbour?)

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I am a Canadian erotica author focusing on Mind Control. I like to explore the corruption of the controller moreso than the abjection of the slave. Still, there's lots of fun to be had in abjection. If you like my work, come join me on Patreon! www.patreon.com/nealjohnstone. ...

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