All Comments on 'Blizzard Ch. 09'

I loved what you did with this chapter. You threw in a twist, revealed a "villain" of sorts, and no, I'm not talking about Winter necessarily. But more the looming threat of these feelings the girls have for him not being real, and that some of them will fade. Despite that, you managed to not reveal too much, and I'm sitting here, wondering if the girls will develop real feelings before the spell fades, how they'll react differently, all kinds of stuff.

Really just want to say that it was some damn talented writing. I'm not impressed too often, but I've been pleasantly surprised by a few authors on here, and so far you're one of them. Good luck on the hardest part: the end :)

So confused lol i kinda understand what's goin on but then I dont, are they being forced to love him?

I said a few chapters back that I thought the "Mind Control" was Faye influencing the girls, and this confirms it. IDK how it's all going to turn out, I just hope it's gradual enough that nobody gets hurt.

3 girls=3 times the DRAMA!!!